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Victor

I stood at the edge of the woods, searching for my dog, Wolf. I scanned the edge of the woods, calling his name, “Wolf! Wolf? Here boy!” At that I heard a faint bark. I knew it was Wolf. A bit of hope danced in my stomach. “Wolf?” I called again, sounding hopeful. Just then I heard another bark, then a whimper. Oh crap I thought as I ran thoughtlessly into the woods. “Wolf? Wolf! Come here boy!” I called again. I went several feet into the woods before hearing another bark. I followed the sound for what felt like forever, until I realized I didn’t know where I was, and it was starting to get dark. “Oh no” I mumbled, as the shadows around me started to grow. Suddenly there was a rustle in a nearby bush. Startled I jumped back as I peered at the oddly moving bush. All of a sudden Wolf jumped out at me, with a grin upon his face. “Wolf!” I cried happily as I petted his huge wolf like head. Just then Wolf darted into the shadows, leaving me with a confused expression. “Hey! Where are you going?” I called, running after him. As I zigged and zagged through the woods, tumbling over loose rocks and huge roots, falling over raptly, Wolf would always wait for me, apparently determined not to lose me in the huge green maze. As I followed him, I realized I still had no idea where we were. I started to get worried, looking around for signs of something I recognized, until I saw a light ahead from the thick woods. A ping of relief fluttered in me as we headed towards the light, but then something odd struck me, I realized it was pitch black out. How can this be? I thought to myself, still following my now excited dog towards the light at the edge of the woods. The light was only a few feet away when I heard a scream coming from the light. I froze. Terrified. As Wolf turned and noticed I wasn’t following anymore, he stopped and looked at me curiously. I took a deep breath and kept going, for my dog’s sake. A few moments passed. We were at the edge of the woods now, as Wolf stepped out into the blinding light, I stood, motionless, still in the shadows. I watched Wolf as he searched for me. Then he noticed me, cowering in the shadows. He barked, and I felt comforted. I took a deep breath and stepped into the blinding light.
As I blinked, rapidly letting my eyes focus in the now lighted area, I looked around; awed as for what stood in front of me was the most beautiful house. It stood timeless, graceful, and possibly hundreds of years old. It was painted off white, and stood about three stories high. Vines gracefully rounded the balcony, and down the walls. I felt my mouth drop at the sight of the glorious house. “Oh wow” I gasped, walking toward the huge door, with the timeless brass knocker, shaped as an owl’s head. I lifted the heavy knocker, and let it fall freely, making a huge noise. The noise startled me as I waited for a reply. Just then the door creaked open. Again startled, I peered into the vacant house. “H-hello?” I stammered. Thoughtlessly walking inside, leaving the door opened. Again, I felt my mouth hit the floor as I peered around the room. It was very bright, very open, and very large. It must have been originally several rooms, but the walls have been removed from most of the first floor. The back wall had been entirely replaced of glass and, beyond the shade of cedars, the lawn stretched bare to the wide river. The only thing in the room as a massive winding staircase, which dominated the west side. As I scrapped my jaw from the recently polished floor, completely forgetting about my dog, which was still playing in the massive front yard, I stumbled across the room, examining the workmanship of the staircase. Just then a strange sound came from the top of the staircase. What was that? I thought to myself as I peered up the winding staircase.

More curious than frightened, I traveled up the staircase, the boards creaking and groaning under my feet. They hold up, for they are strong. I passed by a small window that is heavily curtained, I left it be, continuing up. As I stepped up to the last stair, I stopped short. Standing, in front of me, was a teenaged boy of about 16 or 17. He has night-black hair and blazing blue eyes. Suddenly the gorgeous house seemed like nothing, compared to the boy who stood, not 10 feet from me. Just then, he turned to look at me and smiled. He has a dazzling smile I thought to myself as he said something to me, with a voice like an angel, I fell in love instantly as his words rang in my ears.
“Hello there.” He says, inching closer, slowly. I inhaled. My heart is racing. He smiles again, and I saw the hinting of fangs. My heart started to pound against my chest. “Welcome to our house.” He cooed, now right in front of me.
I stood there, dumbfounded. Staring at the unbelievably beautiful face of death. Peering into his gorgeous teal eyes. "H-hello" I managed to say; yet it was barely above a whisper. The Boy stepped closer to me, his eyes full of wonder and amusement, at the same time. "You do know what I am?" he asked slyly, never taking his eyes off my awed face. I nod. "What?" he laughed a musical note, slowly circling me, never taking his eyes off of my face. "V-vampire" I choked. He nodded. "Good, good." he mumbled. I stood there, unable to move, then I felt a bit dizzy.” Breathe" The unforgettable voice ordered from the back of my head. I obeyed. My eyes grew wide at the smell. "What is that?" I asked, once again dumbfounded. He stopped, and I froze. "What is what?" He sounded curious. He spun me around so I was facing him. He looked deeply into my eyes, as if he was looking for something. "What is what?" he asked again, a bit annoyed. "T-t-t-that s-sm-smell?" I stammered uncontrollably. "What smell?" he breathed into my face, his cold breath swirled across my face and played with my senses. I gasped, not in horror but with awe as I inhaled deeply."Ah, That smell" he frowned a bit. Thinking to himself. This time I asked the questions. "What?" I asked. Still gazing at his beauty. He turned, and walked gracefully towards the stairs and stopped short. "C'mon" he ordered, still deep in thought. Of course I obeyed. Something about this boy drew me in. And I knew I couldn’t run, even if I tried.
As we both walked down the stairs, I couldn’t help but stand several feet away. For I knew at any moment, he could turn and kill me. “W-where are we going?” I asked, fearful at where he was leading me.

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You travel up the staircase, the boards creaking and groaning under your feet. They hold up, for they are strong. You pass by a small window that is heavily curtained, and you leave it be and continue up. As you step up to the last stair, you stop short. Standing, in front of you, is a teenaged boy of about 16 or 17. He has night-black hair and blazing blue eyes. He turns to look at you and smiles. He has a dazzling smile. He says something to you. You fall in love with his voice.
“Hello there.” He says, inching closer, slowly. You inhale. Your heart is racing. He smiles again, and you see the hinting of fangs. “Welcome to our house.” He stands right in front of you.



I stood there, dumbfounded. Stareing at the unbelieveably beautiful face of death. Peering into his gorgeous teal eyes. "H-hello" i managed to say, yet it was barely above a whisper. The Boy steped closer to me, his eyes full of wonder and amusement, at the same time. "You do know what I am?" he asks slyly, never taking his eyes off my awed face. I nod. "What?" he laughed a musical note, slowly circling me, never taking his eyes off of my face. "V-vampire" i choked. He noded. "Good, good.." he mumbled. I stood there, unable to move, then I felt a bit dizzy.."breathe" The unforgetable voice ordered from the back of my head. I obeyed. My eyes grew wide at the smell. "What is that?" i ask myself. He stopped, and i froze. "What is what?" He sounded curious. He spinned me around so i was facing him. He looked deeply into my eyes, as if he was looking for something. "What is what?" he asked again, a bit annoyed. "T-t-t-that s-sm-smell?" i stammered uncontrollably. "What smell?" he breathed into my face, his cold breath swirled across my face and played with my sences. I gasped, not in horror but with awe as i inhaled deeply."Ah, That smell" he frowned a bit. Thinking to himself. This time i asked the questions. "what?" i asked. still gasing at his beauty. He turned, and walked gracefully towards the stairs and stopped short. "C'mon" he ordered, still deep in thought. Of course i obeyed. Something about this boy drew me in. And i knew, i couldnt run..even if i tried.

i have some magic glass that lets you see inside,
a world of pain and joy, with hate and selfish pride.
look into these magic globes that see into a soul,
with a heart that burn with passion, but blood as black as coal.
through this magic window with glass tinted green,
and blue and white and black,and every thing between.
through this magic glass, where everything lives and dies,
if you want to see this magic world, just look into my eyes

By:[BARKS HAS BITE]