13980) Rate my story! (Story can be found at Baseball Karma--and don't worry, it hardly has anything to do with real baseball, if you're not into sports) 1 = the worst and 5 = the best

Number of voters: 8
* a) 1 - It sucked. I was bored. Didn't even bother to finish it.
Number of votes: 0 (0%)
* b) 2 - I was bored, but I finished it.
Number of votes: 0 (0%)
* c) 3 - It was pretty good. I smiled at a few parts.
Number of votes: 1 (13%)
* d) 4 - I chuckled. The writing style was pretty easy to follow.
Number of votes: 1 (13%)
* e) 5 - I laughed out loud at a few parts. I enjoyed it. I want other people to read it. I like the way it was written.
Number of votes: 6 (75%)

2009-01-27 [POP goes the cork screw]: dude ur a good writer lolz xD

2009-01-28 [Raiyr]: That was frickin twisted, kind of funny... and really unfortunate and fortunate at the same time o.O

2009-01-28 [POP goes the cork screw]: lolz ye it was gr8 dude. u gonna b a riter? hows dat story u and mandie were makin?

2009-01-28 [Deg]: Haha, thanks ^^" Yeah the assignment was to get a random picture and then write a story around it and the picture I got was of a part of a baseball bat flying into a crowd and this is the story that came off of it lol oh jeez I'd love to be a writer...but I don't know. I don't know lol ^^ well we have a few but I dunno how it's going lol we keep stopping and I pretty much forget everything that happens anyways so it'd real long and drawn out and mistake filled lol

2009-01-28 [Arms Wide Open]: You have potential, but need to iron out some creases. If you've written anything else then I would like to read it. I'm looking for new talent at the moment, this story didn't quite fit the style I'm looking for, but if you have any other work, and I like it, I might be able to get you published in the near future. Interested? send me a message on here and I'll give you more information. 

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