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The following is an excert from a novel i'm trying to write, please feel free to comment and provide constructive criticism. Insults are of course unwelcome and will be ignored. Needless to say i am abled to prove this excert is my own so plagerism is illadvised.


It’s been nearly five centuries since they came. Nearly five centuries since one of mankind’s deepest questions was answered. They didn’t come with an armada, much simpler than that, they came with peace.
We all remember the date, the 2nd of November in the year 2050, a new light appeared in the heavens, so great was its speed that it seemed to simple “appear” in our atmosphere.
A great ship, as vast as a city and capable of transporting thousands. There where no flying saucers bringing our new visitors to see us, the aliens just simply appeared. And of course no shouts of take me too your leader, they seemed to know exactly where they where going, appearing almost simultaneously before each of out world leaders. They spoke of peace, a great alliance between Earth and the aliens planets. The entire world marvelled, they couldn’t wait to be part of this great galactic democracy. Peace was what the offered, what they asked in return, nothing. You don’t get a gift like this for free, any idiot knows that, why didn’t we stand and fight when we had the chance?
The Lionarens (for this is what the aliens called themselves), called for a summit, a great meating, one representative from each and every country and one from the great ship (which we would later learn was called the charon). No one really knows what happened at the summit, for only a few hours after it began an intence light shone down from the Charon and illuminated the small isle on which the summit was being held.