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Elfpack Daily Poem Submissions 5

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[xxArwenxx]
Will we ever learn?

Subtle blade's disaster
Cruel deceitful masters,
Nations at the mercy,
World inflicting cruelty,
Organized slaughters,
Murder by world orders,
Rich infecting poor,
Poison’s in the cure,
Nature hath no word,
Greed consumes the world,
People in a cold war,
No peace can ever be pure,
Bullets of voice and lead,
Innocent now lay dead,
People not concerned,
Will we ever learn?




[Lanie the cookie]
Forever

the prodding pain that's in my head
sounds like the sound of you heart
I can feel the pain everywhere
it seems like your everywhere always there never to leave you're haunting me forever
put together by faith thrown apart by love
why have we been put together on this world on this lonely earth
we now shall be together forever
to live together
to die together
to be forever together.




[Lycanthrope Heart]
Most Things

Most things have a beginning,
Like life,
It is begun by star drowned lovers,
Like hate,
They are engulfed by their feelings for each other,
Like water,
It flows unstoppable to it's un-timed end,
Like most things.




[shadow_angel]
Forever Midnight...

Midnight
And thoughts of you Are haunting me,
I see your face Etched in memory --
You are gone. Still, the midnight hour
Finds me wide awake, Living over once again
The time we had Together.
You were not By any means
My first love; Although you
Probably Will be my last.
I ache for your embrace, To see your smile
And your eyes -- How they twinkled
When you were Teasing me;
You knew All the buttons to push
To bring me to the Brink
Of self-destruction. So totally lost in you,
I was no equal. I will never
Stop loving you; As long as there is
Midnight; And memory
Brings you back.




[gaither babe]
Thoughts

New feelings come to me,
and now I finally see,
how cruel you can truly be.
Once you were here,
I began to fear,
everything that I hear.
All the words you've said,
Run around my empty head.
And now I wish you were dead.
Your hurt me and you lied...
And I died a little inside.
Even now I wonder why.
How could you?
Why would you?
Is it true?
Do you hate me?
I found the truth when I heard it from you.
But how can such a thing be true.
All of this is so new.
And now I hate you too.




[Monni]
Monni needs to put a title here

You said you loved me,
instead you lied.
You said you'd kiss me,
you never tried.
I gave you my heart,
you gave it away.
I thought you were different,
I thought you would stay.
I guess i was wrong,
you are not for me.
Obviously we're not meant to be.

You left me in the blue,
you promised forever true.
I guess that was a lie too.
You told me that you cared.
I thought you'd always be there,
what went wrong?
I will never know,
what went wrong between us.
It hurts me so bad,
to see you go.

You said you loved me,
instead you lied.
You said you'd kiss me,
you never tried.
You said you'd hug me,
instead you made me cry.




[jam]
suicide of the self

slit my wrist and let it bleed.
let it be the end of it in me.
its time for self-suicide.
this isn't normal suicide.
this isn't the death of the body.
its the death of me, and i ain't sorry.
we hit the peak,
and i kill what makes me weak.
what's left will still be me,
only now i will finally be free.




[iCh3wi]
The Pieces on the Floor

I look in on myself,
And all I see is sorrow.
Pieces of me lie on the floor,
And people are starring down at me,
From the photo's on the wall.

And still I wonder what went wrong?
Why did I choose this life?
Why not another?

For no one truly understands me.
They don't understand my style,
Feelings, or my idea of life.

And after all this,
The pieces are picked up,
And put back on the shelf.

Waiting,
Just waiting...
For another time to fall.




[Track Girl]
Fallen

Cursed upon the dawn of time.
A punishment for our crime.

Hatred swells from deep within.
Our hearts become cold and thin.

Day to day, from life to life.
Living off of pain and strife

Long ago was made a choice,
From the deceits of his voice.

To the heaven's we've brought shame.
And they to us have proclaimed,

That we the angels must fall.




[Roser]
Heaven's Cry

No matter what I do
No matter what I say
I know nothing can take away
Take away the pain
The pain you're feeling now
Anyway I hope somehow
That you've noticed the rain
The rain which set in today
I believe it's God's way
God's way to tell to you
You're not alone
Not alone in this
Heaven's crying too.

- written December 17th 2004




[_dilandau_]
The Emerald of My Eye

The woods are a magical realm.
The swaying of the enigmatic elms,
the peaceful motion is kind.
The forest has nothing else in mind.

The sweet song of the trees,
and the buzzing of the bees.
The forest guardian towers over all.
Many trees stand proud and tall.

Going around the thorny thistles,
The woeful wind whistles.
Sun, reveal your face!
Show us your warm embrace.

The silent symphonious rhythm,
your heart will tell you what's hidden.
Glorious, green grass envelopes the ground.
Wild, free, the plants go abound.

The beautiful emerald of my eye,
the forest, its deep depths without lies.
The rustling of the leaves,
Emanates what you perceive.




[D for David]
The Girl

She sits in the cold
Alone crying trembling
She can’t stop shaking
Jerking yelling wondering
She was cast to the side
Un-wanted un-loved un-worthy
She can never be happy
No matter what
She must always be alone
What is it?
A spell? A curse? Just her?
She will dream forever
Seeing what she could have been
Happy loved special not alone
Her boyfriend? He cheated on her and broke her heart
Her friends? What friends? The ones who lied and betrayed her?
Or the ones that deprived her of everything
She is me!




[the squeegee]
Memory.

My eyes have closed,
they've shut the world out.
Now I can't even see your face
I can only remember
how it felt
to reach out and touch your cheek
to revel in you sweet kiss,
its all just a memory
a moment from the past.
A time when I could breathe
and not be too frightened to speak.
All thats left
is your picture in my mind
nothing too special
just your mark in life.




[gaither babe]
Unexpected Responsibility

New things in life occur,
when in shock your stuck,
a new duty has arisen.
Never experience the joys of life,
when working until the end of night.
Unexpected responsibility's!
They're those little jobs that nag and pick at you until there's nothing left... Until your ready to slash your own throat. Until your ready to jump off the tallest building on earth. Until you are ready to go texas chainsaw massacre on every living thing on earth! Those are UNEXPECTED RESPONSIBILITIES!!!




[Vëaneron]
Special care...

Sitting here all alone,
I don't know why...
Thinking about my future and our love,
And maybe start to cry.

I think I love you too much,
But sometimes I can't find my heart.
I need you to talk with me,
Please don't put me apart.

Someone is taking you away from me,
I don't know what I'm gonna do.
I'll just have to wait and see.
Cause I have a special care for you...

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2006-09-18 [Kaze]: Like I said... nobody's watching this page to moderate it. So.. nuts to this.

2006-09-18 [gods2armys]: damn your right F***

2006-09-19 [Monster Master]: XD

2006-11-21 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: geez....way too big of A page!!!!

2007-01-18 [Im a toaster struddle]: Hey guys tell me what you think. I dont really care, Id just like some opinions :)

2007-01-26 [Im a toaster struddle]: comments comments,im all about getting comments lol

2007-02-01 [Cheese Louise]: Amanda Stanley
*Constantly Forgiving*
Time and time again,
you keep lying to me,
I forgive you,
You make it all better,
Soon later,
I'm constantly forgiving.

I just found out,
the summer you lied,
you were talking to her,
this time is different,
you went behind my back,
you didnt tell me a thing,
you lie so much,
This time I'm not going to be,
Constantly forgiving.

2007-02-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: if you want to post it, it goes up before the comments...

2007-03-28 [Bookwyrm]: Moved the last poem up above the bottom link. Please keep all poems above the link back. :D

2007-04-28 [dragonus]: ok may not be one of my best poem's but I write what i feel and that is how I feel rite now lol

2007-05-01 [Air-inn]: [Bookwyrm] I want to submit a poem, but the page is too full..Should I put it there any way or not?

Erin

2007-05-01 [Bookwyrm]: It says it's too full, but you can add it. I'll talk with some of the others to see when we should make a new page, but go ahead and add your poem. :)

2007-05-02 [Air-inn]: woohoo thanks

2007-05-03 [Bookwyrm]: No problem! ^_^

2007-05-22 [Alizebell]: just a small question
When is the new page going to be approved

2007-05-23 [Bookwyrm]: I'm not certain. Give me a bit of time. If you'd like to add a new poem, feel free. The wiki says the page is getting too big, but it's been saying that at least 20 poems ago. We'll put up a new page when we're ready. ^_^ Continue to use this one until a new one is added. ^_^

2007-05-28 [Alizebell]: okay thank you

2007-05-30 [Bookwyrm]: The new page Elfpack Daily Poem Submissions 6 may now be used. Please use it now. ^_^

2007-05-30 [Alizebell]: thats good

2007-06-01 [Nytefox]: ...So... we can use this other page now?

2007-06-01 [Bookwyrm]: Yes, you can use the other page now, like I just said. And I fixed the link to it from here.

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